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My first Chiptune. It's quite fast and quite short, so... It's not much but it makes me laugh. xD

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FatalExceptionID : Pretty good for a first attempt! It is, however a bit repetitive. I have that problem a lot - wondering how to keep people interested throughout. Even slight changes, applied frequently, will gain a listener's attention. Good job anyway, though!
at January 13th 2008, 03:40 AM

BANJ! : For a first song thats good, much much better than my first atempt which was dry slow and boring, this is mosty full...it sounds to me like there's one of 2 things missing either a stronger bass line..or a stronger more vibrant lead... but i have one main problem to be honest... it's way to repetetive..i know i'm not one to talk about repetetiveness (if that's even a word) but i'd say after about 50 seconds or a minute really mix things up take some sounds away and build up to a crazy bit or something...that's what i'd do atleast.. other wise really good first song :-)
at January 13th 2008, 01:02 AM

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