invisiblebody

Uncool (Very Rough Demo)

so i've had this bumming around on my computer for ages that i made. it's shitty but i just want some feedback on it. it's nowhere near done, this is just the basic idea! and i've never uploaded anything before, so yeah, criticism is welcome! made using lsdj, boss dd-3, electribe-mx

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EvilWezil : I like everything except for the synchopated bass drum! It's a lovely, floaty melody, and the bass grounds it well, but the bass drum doesn't fit in my opinion. Good work otherwise!
at October 1st 2008, 09:13 AM

Everybody Fade : I was pretty amazed that you chose for a drum & bass beat. I personally would have chosen a more ambient rhythm because that would really fit well with the sweet synth line.
at October 1st 2008, 12:42 AM

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