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Kantai

My first chiptune song i made on Fruity Loops7 please can you tell me what i need to inprove for future reference. thank you

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Random : Some of those fast rising notes in the melody are dissonant. The melody over all sounds a bit like notes places out here and there at random. The bass is a little bit boring (eee, eee, eee, eee, eee, eee - not exactly funky). Also, try using something else than 50% squarewaves, and add some more abs. Oh, and just a little technical note: chiptunes can't be made in Fruity Loops. Though, 8bit music/chip style music/bitpop or whatever one prefer to call it can.
at February 23rd 2008, 05:12 PM

Dauragon187 : It also needs more abs.
at February 23rd 2008, 11:46 AM

Smendrick the Magician : I dig the melody line. It does need harder drums instead of just pure noise. But if you added that it would be solid.
at February 23rd 2008, 10:44 AM

xulthis : i liked it, needs a kick or something - oh wait, no kicks. Forget that. Just more abs. :D
at February 22nd 2008, 05:44 PM

bleepheartbleep : wayyyyyy more.
at February 22nd 2008, 11:38 AM

Protest-Beige : It definitely needs more abs.
at February 22nd 2008, 11:25 AM

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