Smendrick the Magician

Please take my hand *fixed

First song on lsdj im accually proud of. This isnt finished, im putting it up for feedback.

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CCIVORY : please, please, please put a good bass in it, and take out the kits. this song would be gold if you did that. right now it just sounds like a whole lot of natural notes played around with. no structured progression other than a four consecutive-note pattern...which leaves MUCH to be desired. it lacks a whole lot and i had to push myself to keep listening to it. at least show me that you ARE capable of giving it a nice boost
at March 5th 2008, 08:54 PM

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