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Crimson Skies

Hi! This is my first attempt, and is still very much a work in progress. Just wondrin' if what everyone (anyone) thinks, and if you have any ideas where I should go with this. Thanks!

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FatalExceptionID : Hey man, nice tune! Some tips for you: * Make sure the tunes match at points, I noticed they were off key at points. * Try and get some more variation! People tend to like songs with melody lines a lot more than they like them without. * The song was really, really repetitive. Watch out for that. Otherwise, good first effort! :)
at March 5th 2008, 11:51 AM

zorgitron : I like it. It's a good start. A suggestion: -Differentiate the sounds more. The bass and lead are both too gritty and sound muddy when they play together
at March 5th 2008, 11:51 AM

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